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Dear angel,
Don’t fall.

Don’t let the arrows pierce your wings,
Don’t let the hammers break your bones,
Don’t let yourself fall.

Dear angel,
Let your tears stream down,
Let your screams reign down upon the Earth.

Don’t let your cries go unheard.

When it storms, let me know that it’s you.
Let me relish in the tears falling on my skin,
The holy water washing away my sins.

Send out your cries,
Let them shake the Earth and rattle the ears of all those unworthy.

Let them go deaf by their own condemings.

Pluck out the arrows and toss them back to their bows,
Dear angel.
Hit the archers through the heart
As they have hit you.

Let the hammers fall down,
Hail upon unsuspecting heads,
Crushing their bodies,
Red seeping into the snow.

Dear angel,
Don’t fall,
Don’t die.
Don’t believe yourself when you say
"I am not worthy."

Grasp your rosary,
Recite your Hail Mary and your scriptures,
Corinthians 6:9,
"Or do you not know that the unrighteous shall not inherit the kingdom of God?”

Don’t fall,
Dear angel.
Break the chains binding you and spread your wings and soar.

Let the clouds clear away.
©2008-2009 ~Maryonette
:iconmaryonette:

Author's Comments

Lookit, more poetry! ='D

I did this one awhile ago, actually. I kind of like it. :) I actually made it for the sole purpose of taking it to school and seeing if my friends could guess what it was about. xD They couldn't, but that's because I'm terrible at symbolism.

And I actually made a picture to go with it. :3 Just a quick photo-manipulation. It didn't take long. It's actually kind of messy. Oh well. xD

Stock used is:
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:iconkinx77:
Sounds pretty religious. :o

Hmm, Is it about rain and hail? Or something deeper?
:iconmaryonette:
I guess it does sound pretty religious, doesn't it? That wasn't intentional. xP Not really, anyway.

No, it's deeper. The rain and hail and whatnot is supposed to be symbolic. But I suck at symbolism. xD
:iconkinx77:
It was just the first thing I noticed, the mention of angels, sin, and that "Or do you not know that the unrighteous shall not inherit the kingdom of God?” part.
Hmm, Is it like, if its raining, fly to somewhere its not? I dunno...
:iconficktion:
you religious freak. xD
lulz. just kidding.
i liked it, but i can only sorta guess at the symbolism. its the sort that i can't really describe in words. don't worry. you're not bad at symbolism.

--
"... now this is a wise old wine."
:iconmaryonette:
I like religions. xP The "Or do you not know" thing is an actual quote from the bible.

It was meant to be words. As in, the angel is simply a person who is constantly mocked and verbally abused about something. The arrows and hammers and whatnot are words, and the thunderstorm was their feelings.
:iconkinx77:
Oh...wow. It like, stronger now. Geez, looking at something the way it was ment to be creates a whole new feeling in things!

Good job!
:iconmaryonette:
Thanks. :3 I'm glad you think so.

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